She made not a sound
One eye closed
Hammer pulled back
In the sheets they lay
Tangled arms and legs
Sweating flesh and trembling breath
The Rook cried out
The trigger quivered
Her lips parted
Eyes darted
Now its started
She won’t end until its finished
She whispers
‘Oui, Cheri. I have caught you.
You gave me mine
She got hers
Now I’ll give you yours’
He got his
Blood sprayed the walls
Sheets red and ruined
Naked Woman in the corner shaking
The gun
Smoking contentedly
She was done
Would do no more
But his body twitched
Her eyes darted
Lips parted
Now that its started
She had nothing to do but end it good
Bullets flew
Plaster cracked, glass shattered
She smiled and said as she left
‘Oui, Cheri. You have gotten yours.’
Her finger moved from the trigger
And she walked away
My favorite lines: “The gun/Smoking contentedly.” Nice work.
abunchofwordz
December 13, 2008 at 12:06 AM
Thank you! I like it too
I wish I could find your blog… still new to WP and navigating it, not sure how to find a link to commentor’s blogs.
the13thcynic
December 21, 2008 at 5:30 AM